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Highschool Rejection

by Ryan R.

Final Rating: 4.11. Finished 42 out of 62 entries.

16,731 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Ryan R.

Description: This is my first time uploading to 11 second club, I don't have much experience doing lip syncing so I already noticed a few errors I need to change. Any constructive criticism is appreciated

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 3 weeks / 20 hours?

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Dave Roddick:

I like the "full size candy bars" money gesture.

luke foster:

Just like bad Think the expression like on the one with extra time with and some much like expression when it comes to this

Megan Menetrey:

The guy's animations are good, but the girl is a bit stiff. It almost looks like one of her arms is glued to her shirt.

Samuel Bourland:

I like you camera angles. But a moving camera says something. So unless you know what you're trying to say with a certain movement, it's best to just cut to different angles.

Bret Kauppila:

That camera needs to ease in and out of its movements a little more.