Elisabeth Janerka:

Super nice setup!
The main character's eyes could be a bit more alive. They stay the same size throughout the whole shot which makes them feel a bit stuck

Sarahrose Anderson:

This is awesome! Only critique is when he says "ever", the arms can swing down a little earlier (like the beginning of the "ver" instead of the end of it) that would make it flow more and seem more natural

Jamie F:

Nice!

Wang Cheng Will:

I feel like the hand gestures should have came down as he says the words ever, and not before

Lea:

It's SUCH a shame that the lipsync doesn't match up with the audio (looks like it's a few frames too early?) because the shot itself is really good!!

Edith Waititu:

I like it because the motion feels fluid