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And what terrible crime is that?

by Marisa

Final Rating: 3.34. Finished 127 out of 147 entries.

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Animator: Marisa

Description: Thank you for the opportunity!

Experience: Student Graduate

Time taken: 2 Weeks


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Jaime Santana:

It's pretty floaty, and it looks like she's drinking a glass that isn't even there. I like the dog on the horse combo, but their dialogue and movement also feels floaty.

Quinn Dickenson:

The camera angles are a bit confusing. It is easy to put the camera anywhere in 3d animation, but it might help the viewer if you keep all shots as if they were all shot from one camera that can turn but doesn't cross to the other side of the scene. The last shot, and the one of the feet seem to have crossed this plane, hopefully that makes sense. Other than that, the animation is very well done.