Jaime Santana:

Awesome, although I wouldn't leave the legs frozen after she got on the table.

Natalie Spangler:

I love this piece for what the rest of the dialogue could be. You set it up beautifully, and the character snapping his book back toward his chest was predictable but felt AWESOME. I especially love the ending pose for the woman.

If anything I feel like her legs are a little strange and feel slightly floaty as they are dangling off of the desk like they are. I'm not entirely sure what I could do with them but maybe there's more to play with there?

Regardless be proud of your submission this month, you did a great job.

Gabrielle Nonnenmacher:

Nice silhouettes on the lady, but the transitions could be improved.

Ankit Jaiswal:

interesting