Comments:
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Stephanie Guerreiro:
Ok. The characters seem a little stiff.
Ben Zingo:
if you use IK, don't forget to use anticipation, overshoot, etc. to help the movements feel more natural! People don't naturally hold their hands in the air perfectly still!
Some eye movements, blinks, etc would also help
Byron Pockrandt:
Not bad. When she says she'll just take tap, she freezes. Have her eyes move or her chest breathe to tell us she is alive. Some movements are fast but not bad.
kayode ogunremi:
I think you have good storytelling poses,, Just work better on the breakdowns and transitions...
Animator: yu-kyung lee
Description: Cafe, on order
This is the first challenge
I'm sorry I couldn't complete it.
I'll submit a better job next time
Experience: about 1 year
Time taken: about 10 hours