Comments:
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Bob:
The characters (especially the girl) should show emotion through body language. The do not seem very expressive.
Lip syncing also needs work. Try adding more movement and mouth shapes when the pronouns vowels
Charlotte:
The characters are a bit stiff and the lipsync still need work. Don't hesitate to push your poses and expressions.
Ariana Kanchuger:
I think you could definitely add a lot more movement to this, most of the poses are very similar which gives it a stiff feeling
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: Something important was thrown away.
Experience: 5 years of school
Time taken: a little bit each week