Giancarlo Ferri:

Has a lot of potential, the poses are good, but the movements need some improvement

Richard Adams:

Lots of visual appeal.

Ariana Kanchuger:

I love the story you told with this! Great staging at the beginning, and funny moment at the end. I would focus a bit on making sure your lipsync is very clear, there were some W’s without an o shape, some f’s without bottom lip on teeth, and some P’s without lips touching. If you add that in I think it would make it a lot more readable!

Jason:

I love th poses, just adding a few more breakdown would make it that much better