Comments:
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Charlotte:
The acting and expressions are nice, the timing is a little too even though. I like the framing.
david:
was that intended??
Richard Adams:
This came out extremely well animated! Top 5 entry
Danish Adeem:
The shoulder on the dude seems to just glide down unnaturally at around frame 60.
The girl landing against the sofa could've also had more impact, as it looks a little too soft at the moment.
Sofia Dubinina:
It is a great animation and the acting is on point. I got distracted with the clipping in the clothes too much to look at the face. I know that this rig is quite glitchy, but I'm sure there are some ways to fix it or cheat it.
I see really strong poses here. I love the acting choice for the guy.
Another thing. I think the expression on f 200-228 would be easier to read if the eyebrows would move after the head turn. Right now she turns and the left eyebrow is already down.
Ariana Kanchuger:
oooo i love the expressions in this one!! and her little lean back into the couch is lovely.
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
A few clipping issues with the clothes that need to be solved; otherwise I'd have given this a higher rating.
Jose Velasquez:
Good acting but you have some clipping going on with the female's shirt. It takes the viewer out of the scene.
Animator: Danish Adeem
Description: A very annoyed lady conversing with a really smug dude.
Hope you enjoy!
Experience: About 1 year
Time taken: Roughly 3-4 weeks