Jen Quinn:

This is great. A simple concept really clearly conveyed. I think the poses you chose are natural, well timed and flow smoothly. I really like your facial animation and lip sync a lot, and the finger bob on “to you” is really great. I would have liked to see a little more movement in the female character’s hair though - maybe a little more drag and overlap as she tosses her head around, but I do think it works as is.

The only thing that struck me as I watched though, is that the characters don’t completely stay on model the whole way through - you tackle a lot of head turns and looking in different directions and the faces and head shapes move around a little throughout. Might be worth keeping a reference layer under your animation as you go to keep it the same size or something? Because that was really all I could fault, everything else I thought was great!

Charlotte:

I really enjoy the fluidity of this animation ! Mind your volumes though ;)

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Really fluid and natural!

Jason:

Great animation, poses and drawings. The only complaint I have is some of the movements/motions towards the end felt a little early compared to the audio (not the lip sync, the characters movements in coordination with the audio) the lip sync looks fine
Other than that I really like what I see!!