Jen Quinn:

I think the hands flapping out on “so” and back into a fist for “sick” is a bit rushed - i think if you had one key pose fewer there and let that motion take a little longer it would flow a little more naturally. But I really like your animation - your facial posing and animation on the]at final line when she looks up on “it was personal to me” broke my heart - there was a lot of really natural emotion conveyed there. The framing and staging of the shot is also very successful in my opinion.

Charlotte:

There's maybe a little too much movement during the first part of her dialogue, but the ending is very subtle and the expressions are lovely.

Giancarlo Ferri:

I'd move the girl's arms a little, like pointing him or herself but otherwise, good job!!

Jason:

I love all the little movements the character does and the syubtle eye glances