Bob:

Wow! Flute and expressive. My favourite thing is the girl subtly moving her hand up and down her tight

david:

my only critique is when she lowers her left hand in around f100 it feel a little too slow and feels computr-y but other than that this looks very appealling!

Ariana Kanchuger:

Love this one! The animation feels very smooth yet has a lot of great pauses to really settle into those moments. I love your facial expressions, and how you can feel her thinking before she reacts. And the punchline at the end was great!
The only two things I would say are to focus on making your lipsync clearer and more articulate, and to remove the empty space on her left in the staging. I would either center her or put space on her right, because a space implies that something is on the other side, and it’s strange to have her pointing away from a space. It was a bit disorienting when the guy was on her right when the staging was telling me he was on her left, regardless of where she was looking.

Richard Adams:

My favorite entry this month so far. The rendering, the animation itself, the unique idea you came up with. Made me laugh. Love it.

Danish Adeem:

I really love the self-soothing motion of the lady rubbing her hand against her thigh, serves as an excellent foreshadowing of the ending.

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

What a twist! So fun!

Jack Hebert:

The animation is great.

Jason:

I was absolutely loving this animation and the final cut to the joke you had at the end works perfectly. TH movement's, arcs, and expressions all fit together and even watching this on mute still gives the paper mood/effect you were trying to capture. (ur render looks rly good too)