What Do You Mean "Bad"?
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too spliny, needs some holds and overall snappiness
A lot of floaty movement throughout but good lip sync, poses and facial animations otherwise.
Some pretty good poses in this. I'm seeing a lot of floatiness and the "finger quotes" is maybe a bit cliche. Staging is feeling a little weird; what is happening in the scene? Good start though.
Great Overall. I think the only thing that bothers me is the quotation mark timing in the dialogue, I would put it a bit after. Great job.
Craig P. Smith:
I like it. It looks good. I feel like the finger quotes should come up and be ready much sooner, and maybe even proceed the last word, "bad". Maybe film some people doing "finger quotes" without them knowing why, and see how they do it naturally.
The rest of it I like a lot.
The setting doesn't appear to be relevant to the quote
Love how he turns his head but the eyes are still locked on whatever he's doing
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