Final Rating: 3.81. Finished 114 out of 169 entries.

13 views including the voting period.


Animator: Angelo Aprea

Description: Two men resting in front of an an ominous stream.

Experience: One year

Time taken: About 3 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Kevin McCullough:

brown character on a brown ground plane is very hard to see, but from what I can see its not that great, needs better planning for poses so its not so spliny. Also I don't see the storytelling need for the character to be seated.


Mouths need shapes, right now all there is is jaw movement. Good camera staging.

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

Lip sync is off..

Jon Coppock:

Great start, I recomend refining the mouth shapes.

April Slocombe:

A couple of cliched poses on "What?" and "Why?" But the rest of the poses and movements are fine as is the lip sync.