Comments:
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Garrett:
Really cool idea! I love the beginning where the man is putting the silencer on. I think the character on the right could've been paid a little more attention (I'm not sure what he's doing or what his intentions are in the scene).
I think messing with the framing more would've allowed more clear silhouettes.
April Slocombe:
Good lip sync, animation and poses throughout.
Jan Abero:
You'll need more poses for both characters to convey that one is preparing for something while the other is really exhausted.
hamid:
left guy looks very stiff also change in poses are not enought
Caelan:
Great environment, and great character animation , I just wish there was a bit more story or at least emphasis on the story. I see the guy is holding a gun and he's probably about to do something he shouldn't while the second character is warning him. Thats all good , I personally feel like some more camera angles to really emphasize what's going on would really improved the shot. Other than that you are a spectacular character animator. Good job!
Animator: Nabil Sahih
Description: A warned friend his warned camarade.un man is worth two
Experience: No experience
Time taken: 2 weeks