Comments:
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Cameron:
Right character's movements don't match what he is supposedly saying
Zoe Piel:
Too many hand cliches. They don't add anything and are distracting from an otherwise good performance.
Casey Colledge:
It might help if there were about 40 empty cans of red bull next to red shirt. He seems pretty wired.
Derek Stewart:
Some cool poses in this, but they don't really make sense for the shot. Keep working at it though as I see some nice ideas.
Shark Bait:
It was alright until the animation went too over the top
Yuri Marcel Vieira:
good one, but the last expression of the character in the red shirt breaks the lip sync
Matthew Kenyon:
Try moving like the red character does and speaking the line.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:
I dont understand the concept..
Craig P. Smith:
Yikes. The guy in the red shirt goes through 4 wacky poses/expressions in a second or two. I love the expressions, but it seems a bit too scattered and rushed. It looks like even a cartoon wouldn't do that.
Otherwise your command of animation and lip-syncing seems to be really good.
Douglas Fletcher:
First half is good, poses at the end let it down
April Slocombe:
Good animation for the most part. The only issues are the man in the red top smiling when I don't think he should be and his movements during his last line are excessive but he also pulls a funny face.
Wolfgang Haas:
looks great, but your characters don't actually have to act out everything they're saying
Animator: ChunYong Chong
Description: computer guy name's aa, he is so stupig and he thoght he had it
Experience: 2 years+
Time taken: 10 days