Comments:
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Cameron:
Need more animation overall. Characters feel very static.
Garrett:
Aside from the alligator at the end the animation feels very stiff. I think it would benefit from some more movement.
I like the idea a lot! And the framing works well!
April Slocombe:
Lovely drawings and subtle movements but the lip sync could be more detailed and the bigger deer remains static while the younger one says his last line. Nevertheless I like the crocodile/alligator coming out of the stream at the end.
Lance Erickson:
The animation in this one seems to be too rigid and stiff.
Daniel Roldan:
Give them more body movement; make them talk with the body so they seem as if they were alive
PRIYA RANJAN DEB:
very nice story...
Animator: Bachi
Description: The male deer teaching his child the dangers of nature (Sorry I couldn't make an appropriate finish version, but I didn't have much time.)
Experience: I am in my last year of animation school
Time taken: About two weeks