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Kevin McCullough:
bg guy at the beginning is great, really well done. The rest is just so so, I think its a little under animated given the tone of voices. A fuller bg might help
Garrett:
I love the beginning of this.
I think more polishing could have been brought to when the character says "Why?" around 163. He sort of 'pops' up which is kinda funny but also a bit too much maybe? Just my thoughts! Good job though!
Zoe Piel:
Nice secondary action on the big guy. Very lively!
Sarah Talbot:
nice job keeping both characters active the entire time. The shot edit during the larger character's dialogue is a bit jarring, however, and make following his lips difficult
Derek Stewart:
Nice idea. There's a clear message in this, and I haven't decided if it's funny or a bit dark. Maybe both. But I like it. Needs some work on appeal in the wounded character and some more polish on the lip sync. Other than that, it's headed in a good direction!
Jon Coppock:
love that Groggy characters attitude
Patrick King:
The movement of the characters looks pretty fluid, but you broke the 180 rule. Also, make your cuts during the action of the guy turning.
Daniel Roldan:
Great "What?"
Animator: Kalpesh Patel
Description: the thought behind this animation is , there is guy how knows what can happened if some one cross the streams, so he tells hi buddy to not to cross
Experience: still have to animat lot
Time taken: 13 days all togather.