Derek Stewart:

Cool idea! I like that moving camera; really adds to the drama here. What needs work at this point is the hand poses, lip sync, and body mechanics. The streams in the distance feel a bit out of place too. Keep at it!

Lance Erickson:

The 2 streams appear to be inside the ship rather than outside it.

Joel Murphy:

Camera angle tilting became distracting. Careful with how it's staging your action. When the character in yellow walks toward the camera, I felt the cam move was good, but while he was sitting, I focused more on the movement of the cam then the characters.

April Slocombe:

I like the idea of this on board a spaceship and the streams appearing in the sky. The poses on "What?" and "Why?" are a tad cliched but the rest of the poses are good as well as the animation and the lip sync.