Comments:
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Kevin McCullough:
Creepiest part is you keep losing the pupils so they are rolling back in the characters heads. Looks like its trying to be too cartoony given the fairly realistic designs. Needs more snappiness if you really want to do cartoony
Cameron:
The squash/stretch is too much, it comes off as strange. The blackboard disappears for some reason.
syrus johnson:
bad posing
Lance Erickson:
The guy defusing the bomb… his eyes are rolled back into his head starting at about frame 140. All we see are the whites of his eyes. Same thing with the instructor from about 182 to 236.
Héctor:
nice try :)
Kristin Turnipseed:
love the over exaggerated entrance on the standing character! Nice work
Animator: Ryan Woods
Description: 11 second club for march about a lesson in bomb diffusion
Experience: college experience
Time taken: one week