Comments:
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Cameron:
Pretty good. Could use some work in character animation.
Derek Stewart:
Good hand gestures. Nice staging. Lip sync needs a bit of work and don't be afraid to loosen your characters. Nice threat at the end too!
April Slocombe:
What is that in the background at the end? Despite this confusion, I like the character animation and lip sync and the streams being the touch-sensitive laser beams on the floor.
Animator: Dan
Description: What's so bad about those streams?
Experience: Some class.
Time taken: Worked on and off throughout the month.