The Job Interview
by Dan Bigwood
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I don't really understand the story you are trying to tell. I like the body pose around frame 116 which looks natural and relaxed. However the other body poses have more of a unnatural feel. Last notes to end on would be to work on removing some of the asymmetry and pose to pose feel to your shot and also work on the mechanics of the body/arms/face.
Animator: Dan Bigwood
Description: Keith lives in his mom's basement. Without ever leaving his room, and with the help of his trusty manservant, Dudley (who is often disguised as Keith's right hand), he lives a life full of intrigue. Today his mom is making him go to a job interview.
Experience: 2 1/2 months
Time taken: 2 weeks