Alec:

What is life...

Alissar Kobeissi:

please don't be an animator

Kiran Jay Babla:

LOL THE END HAHAHHA

Anna Kindt:

We didnt get the ending?

roy cobn:

what is going on here?
i feel i'ts a little bit over acted

Borislav Dimitrov:

i dont get the idea of the shot. and that extra animation you made after the sound makes it even worse... try to think of your shot before start animating, what are you characters, what are they thinking, how they feel. also is good to add some props for the characters to interact with in the scene to sell the idea of what is happening....

Cody Breedlove:

stronger poses

ben malberg:

Nice work on the interaction between the 2 characters. One thing I noticed is there's almost a new pose on every line of dialogue. It feels a bit forced to me. At f250 we see a close up of eyes, but I don't know which character that is. I was a bit confused there.

Erich Hess:

....?
lipsync could use some work.
Could use some drag, overlap, and follow-through.

Kirsten Schow:

The ending is a little strange... it doesn't quite tie into the story you were going for?