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ben malberg:
There's some good wing movement, and I like your cut to the other bird. I noticed the second character's eyes look a bit tired in the first shot but more lively in the 2nd. I think that needs to be more consistent. Also when the bird turns on the last shot, it's feet don't move.
Erich Hess:
the timing of the lip sync is pretty good. It could use more movement in the body. The wing spread could use some more ease in and ease out.
Animator: Gabby
Description: This is a project that we had to do for our animation class at school. There's a lot of stuff I need to work on.
Experience: little to none
Time taken: one week