Yara Ruiz Morelos:

all the movements of the guy have the same speed, try to emphasize some of them, make accents, and play with timing vairation

K Thomas Fosse:

There's too much going on with the arms and hands.. Try to use the whole body to get more power to it. As it is now it's very stiff and too little space for so much movements (I guess you wouldn't show how big - BIG - the fish you just caught was by keeping you elbows to your body.). I like this piece but don't limit yourself (read: the characters) as the body as a whole often tells the story much better than the dialogues.. Keep it up, you've got a good thing going on here :)

roy cobn:

relax the hands a bit.