Diamond Payne:

There are too many random movements and he is just doing too much in this scene.

ben malberg:

The guy looks like a real jerk, nice character development. I wish I knew more clearly who he was talking or not talking to.

Erich Hess:

need believable weight shifts.

Eric Raffle:

I bit stiff he could have been more relaxed , try consider recording yourself to get a more relaxed real human feel