Comments:
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James Hornby:
I like the idea of the secondary action of him working away while he's talking, but I think if you hit a few more of the accents in the dialogue it would improve it greatly
ben malberg:
The pose at the beginning with him writing has nice appeal. The movement feels floaty.
Animator: Steven D'Annunzio
Description: School Project for DAVE School
Experience: Not a lot
Time taken: Two Weeks