Sabrina Winkel:

The mom moves too much and the 2nd character needs to talk

Marcella D.:

Put lip movement on the daughter

Jordan Lewers:

Nice staging and expressions, but there are a few too many poses for such a short amount of time. That being said, Mery would do well in the rap industry

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Feels too jittery for credibility. Sometimes, less is more. Also, some more finesse and balance.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Jelany Andujar:

good animation! but maybe next time try and not have her moving her arms like that (girl with the gray shirt) freaked me out a bit. overall keep it up