Final Rating: 3.68. Finished 154 out of 310 entries.

370 views including the voting period.


Animator: VanG

Description: Teenager at a bar with loose mum

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Gaucelm De Villaret:

Suitable enough. It's appropriately made. Maybe a bit more exaggeration could be applied for maximum fun... Or not?

Marcella D.:

Not bad, but the mother's movement, before the daughter speaks, is a bit weird. A little tilt back, and forth is not bad, but she does it way too quickly.

Thomas Holcombe:

to much movement

Fernando Incetta:

Good work. You need to rely a little bit less in the automated curves. Also don't be afraid to exaggerate and to push your poses and facial expressions further.

Kambria J. Farmer:

In my opinion, the camera movements, as well as the over-exaggerated movements of the mother's head, make the animation too busy and take away from the really nice actions that you have achieved within your shot.