Deanna Keogh:

Just the ending is a little out of sync, and the Mery rig which stops a couple frames towards the end...

Marcella D.:

I feel like I have seen this already, but this one has better lightening and texturing.

John:

Many of the larger movements happened a little fast.

Sabrina Winkel:

The characters move way too much

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Jitters too much and there is not a very good focus on the expression/movement.

Fernando Incetta:

Looks good overall. Try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Also, the lip sync is a little bit off sometimes. Good luck.

Keith Douglas:

Actions are too extreme.