Final Rating: 2.52. Finished 265 out of 310 entries.

388 views including the voting period.


Animator: Himangi Sharma

Description: it's first time.. hope this is ohk for starting (detailing is remaining).

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Gaucelm De Villaret:

Tight camera angles that overstay? No no. Slow constant movement? No no. Give it more energy, show more.

Craig Joseph Massa:

Not a lot of lip/mouth movement going on, needs improvement there. the movements of the characters are stiff. Also, the mother's eyes don't blink at the same time? I don't know about you, but I'm pretty sure humans blink both their eyes at the same time. Otherwise they look like a chameleon.


Something you could improve on is facial movement. The eyes and eyebrows don't really move. Try over-exaggerating things and then toning it down.

Marcella D.:

Needs improvement


more emotions please

Monica Stringer:

last bit of dialogue is fast so animation has to be tightened up. Also facial expressions need to be more diverse with more blinking

Ariyanto Zulkifli:

the animation si too stiff.