Final Rating: 4.29. Finished 92 out of 310 entries.

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Animator: Michael Torres

Description: A daughter asks her mother about the alcohol content in her beverage.

Experience: I have 3 months of experience.

Time taken: It took me 1 week and 4 days to animate this.


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Marcella D.:

By far, the mother has the best facial expression, and movement. I just wish the guy, and daughter had the same result.

Michael Kristiansen:

Decently done. Only thing that I notice is the mother seems to only move her upper body which looks weird to me. Shifting her weight from one leg to the other, or simply translate the pelvis some could fix the problem.

sebastian bravo:

Think more about the composition because all the attention goes straight to the third character and you have a nice animation on the mother.

Terence Staples:

Smooth and great animation. Perfect.

Richard Adams:

I like how the background guy reacts when mom says "in the house".


Good animation on the taller female but I feel the smaller one could use more work in her walk

Kambria J. Farmer:

I would practice working on the lip sync for sure. You have a really nice start and I can see that all of the shapes are there, but the slurring that she uses when she speaks needs improved so that you can better avoid the "jabber jaw" effect that she has.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Chad Cox:

The guy choking cracks me up! Totally makes it relatable, great idea!

Monica Stringer:

love the guy in the back

Gaucelm De Villaret:

A bit too simple... could be fitting, there is good basic poses, and I like the middle part... maybe she reacts a bit too smoothly to the alcohol question and remains a bit static at the end... the rest is okay... maybe it is the best, however...

S J Bennett:

Subtle! The spit take was perfect, bravo!