Final Rating: 2.74. Finished 253 out of 310 entries.

360 views including the voting period.


Animator: Patrick Msp Mcdermott

Description: Patrick M Animation II Midterm

Experience: Collectively Less than a Year

Time taken: A week and a half


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Marcella D.:

Needs better character movement.

Yongliang Zhao:

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Melanie Sanchez-Matos:

You have a good setup and your models' movements are well done, but the mother's lipsynching is a little off starting from 178 to 248. Also when she scoots over, her body just slides over with not much effect on the rest of her body. Overall, it's a really good effort.


The lip syncing in the most notifiable mistake within this animation. There is some unnecessary elbow movement. Good job with the facial emotion of the brown haired character.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

You seem to be going in the right direction for the set-ups, but there is still a lack of expressions and kinda stiff stereotyped body movements...