Ariyanto Zulkifli:

nice try.
the animation is floaty in my opinion, timing a bit off (need reference), and when the mom whisper to the kid, the scene is jumpy.
but keep polishing your fundamental of animation will help a lot. try to shoot some reference. Keep trying and practicing. :)

Marcella D.:

Facial expression need to express some emotion, and please fix the eye before you export.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Feels a bit too stereotyped and expected...

Connor Leuck:

Your lip sync can't be seen with the hand in front of the mother's mouth.

Fernando Incetta:

Nice WIP, it is a prominsing blocking stage

Monica Stringer:

holy whiplash batman, that was a VERY fast cut to whispering in the daughters ear. Maybe add some anticipation to that so it doesn't seem out of the blue

Alex E.:

OH MY GOD HER EYES.