Final Rating: 2.41. Finished 279 out of 310 entries.

390 views including the voting period.


Animator: Benjamin Skadin

Description: I mainly just worked on it for 4-5 hours every Thursday at college (in class and animation club). I made a few tweaks at home, but I couldn't do much at home with my computer not liking the program I used.

Experience: 3 Months

Time taken: 3 Weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Numerous hand movements do not appropriate expression/acting make. Especially when standing stiffly still.

John Michael Wilyat:

Don't animate the camera without a strong reason to do so.

Marcella D.:

The camera, and character movement need improvement

Keely Imai:

Good start! The kid kicking their legs while sitting was a nice touch, and the swoop around of the camera in the beginning was a nifty approach. Some thoughts: I think the camera zooming in on the mom was a little abrupt. The mom's actions with her arms may seem more natural if you include the shoulders and hips next time. Also, try to avoid the floating between two positions, such as what happened with the mom's right arm near the end of the clip. Keep it up! :)

Alex E.:

Can a mother be an identical twin of her daughter? That's a neat idea.