Gaucelm De Villaret:

This is more emoting rather than expressing. The characters don't feel much like they are interacting with one another, which is the point of that dialogue.

Sarah Schulze:

Nice Idea, the only thing maybe is that your charachters are moving to much. You may want to reduce a little bit :)

Lechard P:

over exaggeration in the second character gives off weird vibe

Marcella D.:

The lightening is a distraction

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.