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Ancient mom and daughter

by Mohamad Rahman

Final Rating: 3.74. Finished 145 out of 310 entries.

411 views including the voting period.


Animator: Mohamad Rahman

Description: One fine day, in thesupermarket. Mother and her daughter want to buy some drink.

Experience: 3 weeks

Time taken: 5 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Maryline Chemoula:

I loooove the idea .The art is cute and everything works together but there are little jumps sometimes in the camera or in the animation .

Sabrina Winkel:

Try to have the characters move slower

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Yes, it is fully rendered and colored, and looks like a finished product, but the expressions and movements are too basic, few and stiff.


Like it, This is a like commericial work! haha

Marcella D.:

The animation is a bit too quick, but I do like the set up.

Melanie Sanchez-Matos:

Your character designs are very charming. There is some delay to the character's mouth movements when the audio begins to start. The mother's mouth movements are well timed, but after she takes the bottle from the girl it looks awkward from that angle. The audio also cuts off at the end.

Fernando Incetta:

Good job. It looks a little bit unfinished but with lots of potential. Keep it up