Gaucelm De Villaret:

Uh, the drawing doesn't have very good structure, I think you should practice more of these basics, even if it's manga style (it requires some solid bases). Even then, it lacks smoothness and solidity to decide on its level of expression.

Sabrina Winkel:

So so good!!

Marcella D.:

The mother's face look weird, but everything else is set up nicely

Charlie Abb:

Lip synch and body mechanics are good. Needs color and completion.

Alex E.:

I'll give you extra brownie points for taking an anime approach.