Joel Cisneros:

way too floaty

Gaucelm De Villaret:

It is very expressive, but is unfitting overacting, like she's reacting to something else.

Jordan Lewers:

I like how you give weight to Mery's jump. The bottle blocks her hand in a few frames, so I'd recommend checking your silhouettes. Also, try to give Mery's left hand more expression, because it doesn't seem to have much range throughout the video

Marcella D.:

The mother in the beginning, before she says, "oh, god" her movement is pretty confusing, but-after that- not bad.

Sabrina Winkel:

I like the facial expressions

OceanicBoy Joey:

I have no idea what is she doing from the start.. The actions are kinda overreacting.

Fernando Incetta:

Nice body language, specially when gasping. We should be able to see the other character talking at least in an establishing shot, or getting some reference from her in the right side of the shot. Good job.