Sarah Schulze:

The idea is good but I think you want to change less the camera angle. Its quite difficult to understand what's happening. Nice work :)

Steve Schwartz:

Too many cuts

Marcella D.:

Way too fast

Mark Hanson:

decent drawings but there's too much unnecessary motion here

Richard Adams:

It's a bit confusing.

Fernando Incetta:

A prominsing WIP

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Please don't change shots so fast, her going from left to right, I could hardly let my eyes concentrate! Anyway, there aren't enough frames to have a smooth/appropriate enough animation to give judgment...