Brennny:

good body animation.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

i like the mother's reaction and her body language after the question, although the beginning and the ending are not quite there yet, imho.

Craig Joseph Massa:

Good movement of the mother. You even got the steps down correctly. My only critique would be to try and position the camera where you can always see the face of the main character. If the character is supposed to be the center of attention, the face of said character would always be in view. Other than that, great work!

Lechard P:

Just wish you would've put the off-screen voice on-screen

Marcella D.:

Not bad

Mark Hanson:

You remind me of myself. Good potential wasted on minor details.

Sthefany Briceño:

awesome work but You may move the camera in the way we can see the facial expression of the character that will be awesome to see in your shot

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. The camerawork needs tweaking too, check references if you need help. Good luck.

Monica Stringer:

not the best camera angle to display your animation

S J Bennett:

Great acting but the camera placement lets it down.