Final Rating: 3.26. Finished 208 out of 310 entries.

373 views including the voting period.


Animator: Moises Horta

Description: mary and her daughter

Experience: few months

Time taken: 2weeks


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Maryline Chemoula:

Love the idea but Mery is floating too much. and the other character doesn't move at all .It's sad because this animation could have been great. Keep working on it please ! :)

Deanna Keogh:

Animation is too slow... Work on adding keyframes in between poses

Sabrina Winkel:

Lip sync needs work

Steve Schwartz:

Movement is really floaty, especially at the end

Marcella D.:

Needs improvement

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Did I see this one before? Anyway...
The "kid" is completely still? What the?
THe "mother" is quite unbalanced in her movements. As she jumps, she is doing unnatural smooth movements as if she was modeling for a fashion ad... this isn't exactly what would be believable for a situation like this.

Terence Staples:

Lip sync wasn't articulate. Starts being a bit floaty towards the end.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Ariyanto Zulkifli:

the animation is floaty and the kid is too stiff.