Marcella D.:

It feels like everything in this animation was borrowed from other sites, and the female characters need to have a different design to them. Plus, the mothers shirt is transparent through her shirt, probably need to fix that.

Fernando Incetta:

It's fine to re-use some assets, but this is too evident. Sorry

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Pretty BGs, but honestly, there is barely animation work on this... stiff position, the same position for the two characters, and no expression apart from a few arm movements... I say, no.

Alex E.:

What are they looking at?