Gaucelm De Villaret:

Could work, but the expressions are not very communicative, feels subdued and is a bit jittery at times.

Ariyanto Zulkifli:

nice setup.
really weird idea. Timing and spacing is off. Try to shoot some reference file might help. keep practicing. you'll get better. :)

Marcella D.:

The movement with the cake shifts way too quickly, and awkwardly.

Thomas Holcombe:

to much movement

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Melanie Sanchez-Matos:

During the first 65 frames, the movements are well timed, but after that the mother's movements are too jerky and the lipsynching looks off because of it. The girl during frame 150 through 180 sways way too much. The mother pushing the flask into the cake is a nice touch though.