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In the moon light on a yatch

by jobygeorge

Final Rating: 5.70. Finished 23 out of 310 entries.

832 views including the voting period.

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Animator: jobygeorge

Description: In the moon light on a yatch having a wonderfull time without liquer

Experience: 6

Time taken: 25

Comments:

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Ramon Arango:

great body mechanics I think. You nailed the daughter but Im not sure about the mothers face. The lipsync feels spliny and very hesitant. Dont be afraid tt go into more extreme poses for the lips. Acting wise I get kind of a sexual vibe in the end. It just feels too intimate.

Marcella D.:

Not bad.

Jose Virgil:

the action around 130 seems a bit delayed compared to the audio. darn good though.

Daniel Ramirez Bastidas:

Great! But, creepy..

Isaac Holzwarth:

the animation is good, but I'm not sure the expressions quite fit the dialogue.

Naga Anim:

Nice

Fernando Incetta:

Good work! Pretty fluid. The lip sync is a little bit off, though.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Has a nice idea, but there isn't enough expression to make it all well...