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Alcohol? Me? Ah!

by Steph

Final Rating: 4.99. Finished 49 out of 310 entries.

545 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Steph

Description: It's lunchtime, a mother came for a drink with her daughter.

Experience: 5 years (series)

Time taken: ~8 half-days maybe ...

Comments:

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Gaucelm De Villaret:

Feels fine enough. Just having the mother seen is abit cheapening, maybe... The level of expression feels a bit non-believable, maybe... Could use some depth, maybe...

Steve Schwartz:

Don't think you really need the girl's hand in there, the second cup tells enough. Also, the mother does a lot of hand movements.

Ramon Arango:

you are a bit overambitious with your posing starting at 157. try to really focus on the essential poses. 2 are probably enough and then bring in elements to convey the thoughtprocess. the beginning works much better

Marcella D.:

Very lovely dear.

Sarathbabu A S:

posses are good, but changes, the pose to another pose, is getting floaty feel, nice work keep it up..,.,.,

Fernando Incetta:

Great body language and hand animations.

Connor Leuck:

Nice hand animation!

Jordan Lewers:

Mery is pretty sassy in this one, isn't she? Good stuff!