Comments:
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Marcella D.:
The mother need some more smooth motion when she is changing poses.
John:
Something you could look into improving is that a lot of the movements were very sudden or choppy.
Charlie Abb:
Good concept. A bit choppy; body and facial expression could have better transition.
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Awww, there was some potential here! But the movements are too sudden, even for this genre, and is more reminiscent of a car bumping on pebbles. As said by Glen Keane (I think), avoid the "saw-tooth" regularity in animation.
Bonnie Smith:
I love how you've added a bit of humor in it. I would just like the movements to be a bit smoother.
Fernando Incetta:
Good blocking, it has a lot of potential. Good posing overall
Animator: Mitchell
Description: My entry for March's animation competition
Experience: 2nd year animation student
Time taken: Over the course of the whole month