Ariyanto Zulkifli:

the pose too stiff and too much camera movement. try to learn more principle of animation, you'll get better.

Sharkhead:

Not ready

Marcella D.:

Awkward camera, and character movement. Please don't use flashing lights (unless they are at a party).

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Uh, what's with the weird flashes and zoomouts? Even then, the movements are repetitive and are barely expressions.

Fernando Incetta:

Lacks animations principles, and the montage is really weird. There's no point in cutting between similar shots, and the flashy white transitions makes it worse. Keep it up!

Terence Staples:

Needs alot of work.