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Alcohol is for Teens, Right?

by Jordan Lewers

Final Rating: 4.20. Finished 98 out of 310 entries.

437 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jordan Lewers

Description: A reckless mother is approached by a youthful teen about her "special" drinks, while a special guest looms in the background.

Experience: ~3 Years

Time taken: A few weeks or so


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Sabrina Winkel:

It's good. I love how she took a sip at the beginning

Marcella D.:

Everything was alright to me, until the point of the car passing by. I wish that there was another rig used to put inside the car, so that the rig could give a nasty look to the mother. That way the car passing by has a purpose in this scene.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

You have some right ideas there, but it is not executed to the fullest potential. Note to the wise: overacting does not automatically act good acting. Nuance makes a difference.

Fernando Incetta:

Good poses and overall actions. The scale between characters is a little bit off (mom looks smaller than child). Keep refining based on the animation principles. Good luck!