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My first time at a Club

by fernando aramburo

Final Rating: 2.30. Finished 286 out of 310 entries.

380 views including the voting period.


Animator: fernando aramburo

Description: Hello everyone,, I am a student of animation and I am new to the 11secondclub.

Experience: Im student

Time taken: like two days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Deanna Keogh:

The cameras are too far away - we cant see whats happening animation wise. Expect for that last one... that camera move was a bit unnecessary

Marcella D.:

Need more movement from the Max rigs, and why do they have their eye's so wide?

Fernando Incetta:

A good starting point. Do some research on the 12 principles of animation and build from there. Good luck

Connor Leuck:

The camera is too far away after first cut.

Ariyanto Zulkifli:

too floaty. the timing, spacing and staging is off the mark, in my opinion.