Final Rating: 5.37. Finished 34 out of 310 entries.

646 views including the voting period.


Animator: John Michael Wilyat

Description: A girl suspects she's been given an adult beverage.

Experience: 3-4 years self-taught

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Georgeanna Clark:

mouth seems off right at the end, other then that great

Ramon Arango:

It would help if you offset some movements to eachother, like hands to head, chest to head etc. because right now I really feel the 'pose to pose' which makes it a bit stiff. Humans dont move things with exactly the same timing. Also the transitions between the poses are very linear and stiff. try to get more interesting breakdowns

Marcella D.:

Not Bad.


I can tell you put a lot of work into this, but lip sync could've used some more work. To me, it didn't look like it matched up with the audio and there were a couple spots where the mouth or cheeks jumped a little. ( Like from frame 159 and 160 for example)


shows a little too much teeth in lip sync...

Sabrina Winkel:

Why is the background blurry?!

Gaucelm De Villaret:

This is almost smooth enough, but the movements have some stiffness and stereotype in them that kinda prevent it from reaching heights.

Bokang Koatja:

Ahh... Other than the lipsync I think its working really well. Also the mom's wrist looks broken. You're bending it too far :) Nice job!

Connor Leuck:

This is very nice! The shoulders seem raised a bit too high at times though.

Fernando Incetta:

Nice posing and body language, specially with hands. It still needs some refining but it's a solid piece anyways. Congratulations.

Coleton McMillan:

The movement and facial expressions are extremely well done. The only part that lacks fluidity is the lip sync. Tightening up and smoothing out the lips would help along with not over exaggerating the words. Overall nice animation just not quite complete.

Chad Cox:

Mother's lipsync is solid at the beginning, but seems off where she says house, the "how" mouthshape seems too early.